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Author Topic: Soldier's portrait  (Read 805 times)

Offline coopmj

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Soldier's portrait
« on: March 20, 2020, 05:44:06 PM »
Hi All,

Let me know what corrections are needed here. I'm happy to put the vignette back (either the frame that was in the original or something softer.)

Stay safe and healthy! :)

Mary

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Offline Lynnya

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Re: Soldier's portrait
« Reply #1 on: March 20, 2020, 06:14:38 PM »
Looking good Mary  :up2: The only thing that struck me a bit was that it's a little sharp for and older image.. maybe a bit too vibrant.. see what others think..
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Re: Soldier's portrait
« Reply #2 on: March 21, 2020, 04:44:44 AM »
Yeah, I'd tone it down. Looks fine without the vignette. as it wasn't a true photographic vignette.
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Offline Candice

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Re: Soldier's portrait
« Reply #3 on: March 21, 2020, 02:08:03 PM »
Some basic channel clean ups.



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Offline coopmj

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Re: Soldier's portrait
« Reply #4 on: March 22, 2020, 02:00:28 PM »
Does this look better?  I think he might be a bit too pink.




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Re: Soldier's portrait
« Reply #5 on: March 22, 2020, 02:31:45 PM »
How about this?

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Offline coopmj

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Re: Soldier's portrait
« Reply #6 on: March 22, 2020, 04:54:00 PM »
Perfect!  Thanks everyone!


Offline Lynnya

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Re: Soldier's portrait
« Reply #7 on: March 23, 2020, 03:57:33 PM »
Great job Mary.. also great to see Kiska's tips.. mine are usually too yellow.. :up2:
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