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Offline battleaxe

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re: sent you two pics
« on: November 21, 2011, 10:06:19 AM »
Hi Jonas ,
 I sent you two pics.   Ignore the one that has finished on it.  The one saying "complete" is the one to look at.


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Re: re: sent you two pics
« Reply #1 on: November 21, 2011, 10:47:52 AM »
Hi Nancy,

overall I really like what you did with this one, as you kept it looking very natural and didn't force anything into the picture that wasn't there already.
However there are still some minor problems that need to be fixed.
The first thing is that you seem to have repainted the right kid's hair though I don't see why you would have to do that?
Some of the edges are also still contaminated with color spill (e.g. the right kid's hair in the bottom photo).
On the top photo you seem to have changed the yellow "CURRAN" to white.
The top photo also still has a small magenta border on it that needs to be removed.
In the bottom photo the right kid's skin tone also looks a little too magenta to me, maybe you could reduce that a little bit?

Thanks,
Jonas
Best regards,
Jonas

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Re: re: sent you two pics
« Reply #2 on: November 21, 2011, 06:28:12 PM »
Jonas,
  I think I corrected most of our issues with this one.  I had painted the  right girls hair, actually a bad mask. Because....I had turned it green.  In this next one I masked in the original hair.

Thanks for your help so far.

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Re: re: sent you two pics
« Reply #3 on: November 22, 2011, 06:10:18 AM »
Nancy,

now it looks absolutely wonderful :-)!

Great job!

Thanks,
Jonas
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Jonas