Guy Talk

[Bambi]

Original



WIP



First proof. Any help you can give me on this one is appreciated.

Bambi

[PhotoBob]

Hi Bambi,

I'm glad you grabbed this one - I was supposed to be working on it but health issues have gotten in the way  >:( .  Since I've got the file, I get to peek at the blue channel!  It looks like his fingers bend over the can, he also has a pen in his shirt pocket. His face is better than I could do!  :)  This detail photo is enlarged from the blue channel:



It sure is looking good! You have these yellow stained jobbers MASTERED  :up:

Bob

[Bambi]

So right. The best advice comes from the guy who's been there. Hope you're feeling better.

Now that I see it in this format, I think the man on the left is too bright and his hair is too dark. There's a highlight on the top of his hair in the original and, from earlier pictures I've seen, I think it's lighter.

That's why I post on Forum. Thanks, PB!

Bambi

[Bambi]

Fixed the hand on the man on the left. Lightened his hair and adjusted the color a little. Brightened the flowers. Gave the man at left more shape. And fixed various little flaws.

Bambi

[PhotoBob]

Now it's looking good Bambi!   :up:  I guess what I'm seeing on his shirt isn't a pen - it's in the wrong place to be a pen.

Bob

[Mike S.]

Bambi,

Looks like you  have it now.  Good Job.

Mike