Mel's workshop

[melrcomp]

Opinions please :)



Thanks

[glennab]

Hi Mel

Beautiful job! I'd only make two suggestions.  I'd smooth the edge along her shoulder on the left.  There appears to be a little debris left.  Also I'm wondering if there'd be so much shadow around her hair on her shoulder, or any at all.

I definitely appreciate the color level.  It should make a great print.

Best wishes!

GG

[mschonher]

Very nice work! The only thing I can add is that it needs a levels or curves adjustment. The original has a deeper and richer tone...and oh yes you could clean up that left shoulder a bit..........Mary