#8 - Feedback...

DavieBoyDave · August 11, 2008, 09:30:40 AM

Guys,

Been looking at this one on and off for a few days... Can I please have you thoughts/comments so far? Anything else need doing? Any obvious problems?

Dave.

DavieBoyDave · August 11, 2008, 09:33:26 AM

Just noticed the shadown on the backdrop - will fix that :)

Hannie · August 11, 2008, 10:13:12 AM

Hi Dave,

Another good job!
You could lighten the hands and the pants a little. A little softening of the hard outlines and a tiny bit less saturation?

Hannie

DavieBoyDave · August 11, 2008, 10:31:50 AM

Better colour/brightness/lines?? Thanks Hannie :)

Man I need a beer! :)

Hannie · August 11, 2008, 10:49:44 AM

Dave, I like your version where it is a little darker better but I do like that you made it less saturated.

Hannie

DavieBoyDave · August 11, 2008, 01:00:51 PM

How about we meet in the middle? :funny:

Hannie · August 11, 2008, 03:54:14 PM

The middle looks just right to me!

(I looked at it earlier on a another computer and all the the images looked very light, sure hope I gave you the right advice! :-[ then again, you would have said something if it didn't look right on your PC, wouldn't you?)

Hannie

Tess (Tassie D) · August 11, 2008, 07:41:16 PM

Beautiful job Dave. :up: The colours look fine here.