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Title: Family Pic
Post by: Marydh on July 28, 2019, 03:26:30 PM
Hi everyone.  Could use some extra eyes on this one. 
What do you think?
Thanks,
Mary
(https://i.postimg.cc/hXx65qwf/for-forum.jpg) (https://postimg.cc/hXx65qwf)

(https://i.postimg.cc/McSNkF2t/Orig-for-forum.jpg) (https://postimg.cc/McSNkF2t)
Title: Re: Family Pic
Post by: Jo Ann Snover on July 28, 2019, 06:01:11 PM
It's looking good, but I did spot a few small things that need fixing:

-The left side of the picture frame (by the boy's head) is skewed so it doesn't line up with the original. The frame is different from the original - the inner ridge on the molding is missing
-The standing boy's shirt sleeve is super sharp where it's fixed. Should be very soft edge like the rest
-The baby's lips are very asymmetrical and don't look natural.
-Highlights on the baby's forehead are blown
-The trouser leg for the standing boy stops at the older man's elbow. I think it needs to continue down

You did a great job getting the yellow out, but the restore looks a bit washed out. You might experiment with a little more contrast (while keeping the highlights) and or a bit of vibrance for the skin tones to see if that perks it up a bit.

Nearly there!!
Title: Re: Family Pic
Post by: Marydh on July 28, 2019, 07:46:24 PM
Goodness, I have no idea what happened to her forehead.  Geez.
Yeah, I had the frame skewed like the original but it looked goofy but I think I have it right now.
I fooled with the baby's lips for WAY too long.  I think she's smiling more than I have her but I don't want to fool with it anymore.  I hate it when I can't get it to look the way I see it in my head.
I think I perked it up a little bit but any more and it got too dark.
So whadaya think?
(https://i.postimg.cc/F1Px67NC/for-forum-again.jpg) (https://postimg.cc/F1Px67NC)
Title: Re: Family Pic
Post by: Jo Ann Snover on July 28, 2019, 08:55:46 PM
Take a look at these adjustments to your WIP - I think the baby is smiling more (I made some outlines over the original) and there are a lot of areas where the shadows have been lost. Around the nose, jaw line, cheeks, etc. I added those back without cloning. I also pulled back some of the highlights on the whites (I think the boy's shirt might not have been white, but let's just call it white :)

There was some odd damage on the older man's elbow (right of picture) that I touched up too.

See what you think


(https://i.postimg.cc/rRqw7r0J/Family-of-four-edits.jpg) (https://postimg.cc/rRqw7r0J)
Title: Re: Family Pic
Post by: Marydh on July 28, 2019, 09:02:41 PM
Thanks a lot  Jo Ann.  I'll take a look.  (Wine time right now though. 🍷) 😎
Title: Re: Family Pic
Post by: Jo Ann Snover on July 28, 2019, 09:53:59 PM
Have to keep your priorities in order :) à votre santé
Title: Re: Family Pic
Post by: Marydh on July 29, 2019, 02:46:46 PM
Is this better?  What I thought were her lips were really the inside of her mouth.  (Duh)
(https://i.postimg.cc/w79gP25g/for-forum-3.jpg) (https://postimg.cc/w79gP25g)
Title: Re: Family Pic
Post by: Jo Ann Snover on July 29, 2019, 03:09:57 PM
Much, much better. She has that "happy baby" smile.

The shadow areas on people's faces don't look different from the earlier version - did you decide to leave that be?
Title: Re: Family Pic
Post by: Marydh on July 29, 2019, 04:08:20 PM
Oopsy.  I thought you just meant the baby.  I'll fix and send it on.  Thanks so much for your help.  The baby thanks you too. 🐥