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Title: Johnny Rockets
Post by: Lynnya on July 15, 2019, 03:08:43 PM
Hi gang.. would appreciate eyes on this one please...


(https://i.postimg.cc/LJJ4Nyyp/Lassin-A-18-10-4x6.jpg) (https://postimg.cc/LJJ4Nyyp)

(https://i.postimg.cc/vDXQMRky/forumwip.jpg) (https://postimg.cc/vDXQMRky)
Title: Re: Johnny Rockets
Post by: Shadow on July 15, 2019, 04:34:32 PM
Hey girl. Looking good. There's a bit of damage left at the top above the window on the left. Might be a bit too much blue if her hair is black.See what you think.

(https://i.postimg.cc/c6sWjfY7/2019-07-15-Johnny-Rockets.jpg) (https://postimg.cc/c6sWjfY7)
Title: Re: Johnny Rockets
Post by: Lynnya on July 15, 2019, 04:45:12 PM
Thanks Lyn.. one of those last minute tweaks .. the skin was too yellow so I tweaked the blue.. now too much blue lol.. good eyes on the damage thanks...
Title: Re: Johnny Rockets
Post by: Jo Ann Snover on July 15, 2019, 04:48:11 PM
Couple of small things - on her dress, I think the arm shapes aren't quite right - she looks chestless :)

On the sweatshirt, it should say 'SAN FRANCISCO'

I think the center woman's highlights are a tad bright

There's some discoloration in the lower part of the purple dress - I put a solid color adjustment layer set to color blend mode over it (masked to just the bottom parts)

Otherwise looks great - see what you think


(https://i.postimg.cc/vgYqHsSJ/Lassin-A-18-10-4x6-adjusted-WIP.jpg) (https://postimg.cc/vgYqHsSJ)
Title: Re: Johnny Rockets
Post by: Lynnya on July 16, 2019, 10:59:10 AM
Thanks Jo Ann.. will fix today  :up:
Title: Re: Johnny Rockets
Post by: Mhayes on July 16, 2019, 02:48:09 PM
Lynn, nice work and good tips. I think the woman's dress has shoulder pads which would make the sleeves flare out a little. Considering this is an older woman and perhaps petite--yes, to shade variations (shadows in the folds) so as not to appear flat, but not because of "she looks chestless."
Title: Re: Johnny Rockets
Post by: Lynnya on July 17, 2019, 11:09:23 AM
Thanks Margie.. I did alter it and sent her home and was accepted.