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Title: Young boy on the path
Post by: Lynnya on March 30, 2018, 01:24:36 PM
Hi gang... just starting on this beauty... :cool: The muckerupper has been at it again...color correction only so far.. did levels, curves for black and white and then found it hard to find a neutral gray so I guessed it.. it came out very green so I lowered the opacity of that layer a tad.. comments welcome..

(https://photos.smugmug.com/photos/i-QHTsKKF/0/a18e3d5b/XL/i-QHTsKKF-XL.jpg)  (https://photos.smugmug.com/photos/i-XzZJBhf/0/34d0d0b2/XL/i-XzZJBhf-XL.jpg)
Title: Re: Young boy on the path
Post by: kiska on March 30, 2018, 02:49:33 PM
I'm wondering if he might have one foot on a skate board...
Title: Re: Young boy on the path
Post by: Lynnya on March 30, 2018, 03:37:05 PM
yeah.. could be the edge on our left.. or the shadow of...
Title: Re: Young boy on the path
Post by: Hannie on March 30, 2018, 06:23:21 PM
Could this be a girl?
Title: Re: Young boy on the path
Post by: Shadow on March 30, 2018, 10:09:32 PM
Color correction looks good. Look forward to seeing what wonders you do with this one! Good luck.
Title: Re: Young boy on the path
Post by: Lynnya on March 31, 2018, 01:02:03 PM
Thanks Lyn.. Hannie... could this be a girl??? I'll have to find out now.. lol :crazy:
Title: Re: Young boy on the path
Post by: Lynnya on March 31, 2018, 04:46:40 PM
This is where I'm at.. still needs a lot and I haven't even thought about starting on the boy/girl yet.. waiting to see if I can get more info..got it from Bambi.. he's a boy.. not skateboard...phew!!!

(https://photos.smugmug.com/photos/i-dstHdPG/1/10860f92/XL/i-dstHdPG-XL.jpg)
Title: Re: Young boy on the path
Post by: Shadow on March 31, 2018, 08:41:58 PM
You are well on your way!
Title: Re: Young boy on the path
Post by: Mhayes on April 01, 2018, 02:20:38 PM
Lyn, I feel your pain on this one, but with each post it is getting there.

Margie
Title: Re: Young boy on the path
Post by: Lynnya on April 04, 2018, 04:04:16 PM
Hi gang... slogging away at this one... not very much to use.. nothing in the damaged channels  :-\  this is where I've come to a grinding halt today...

(https://photos.smugmug.com/photos/i-zfkFBbk/0/4e4a4afb/XL/i-zfkFBbk-XL.jpg)
Title: Re: Young boy on the path
Post by: Candice on April 04, 2018, 06:49:38 PM
 :up:
Title: Re: Young boy on the path
Post by: Shadow on April 04, 2018, 08:16:56 PM
You've come a long way. Put your feet up and take a break.
Title: Re: Young boy on the path
Post by: Lynnya on April 05, 2018, 08:42:32 AM
Yes I definitely need to..have to redo the legs...tried to follow  the original and broke his legs :wow:...standby for new legs...
Title: Re: Young boy on the path
Post by: Lynnya on April 06, 2018, 03:34:18 PM
 :crazy: :D

(https://photos.smugmug.com/photos/i-RQVRfcS/1/a403f5d1/XL/i-RQVRfcS-XL.jpg)
Title: Re: Young boy on the path
Post by: Shadow on April 06, 2018, 04:17:48 PM
It's getting there!  ;)
Title: Re: Young boy on the path
Post by: Lynnya on April 06, 2018, 04:18:57 PM
What next.. I can't see the woods for the trees.. what are you seeing.. :hug:
Title: Re: Young boy on the path
Post by: Shadow on April 06, 2018, 04:30:41 PM
Hmmm, couple little things draw my eye. The car in back - overlay the orig and widen it back up a bit maybe? The sidewalk and other expanses of white - maybe do your magic and add some concrete texture and bring down the brightness some? You've worked wonders with the legs! One little pic, on the right leg, do you see the streak on the inside? You are almost there girl. Good luck! Eager to see the final.
Title: Re: Young boy on the path
Post by: Mshake on April 06, 2018, 06:00:59 PM
I like what you've done to this so far.  What I see is the shadows to my eye are off a bit. For him, the ground shadow I think it should come more towards the 8 o'clock position instead of 9 o'clock. Looking at his shirt and pants his right side is in shadow so I'm thinking his right leg should be in shadow and each leg on it's right side should be in shadow too. Looking at the car in the background on the left, add a shadow to the street to match the scene.

I would also go with Shadows suggestions and also add one of those cracks in the sidewalk run in the foreground and maybe one behind him between him and the driveway.

After that, I would call it done. Nice job!
Title: Re: Young boy on the path
Post by: battleaxe on April 06, 2018, 11:24:27 PM
Looks good.  Though his feet are like your first pick.  I also think he is holding a skate board when I look at the Magenta channel though that could be damage.
Title: Re: Young boy on the path
Post by: Lynnya on April 07, 2018, 08:31:20 AM
Thanks all for great comments.. all very helpful indeed. BA I'm thinking you may be right about the skate board.. I never thought to look in the cmyk channels!!! duh... that would explain why his leg looks a bit bent to the side.. it's the board leaning against it...... maybe....hmmm

back to the drawing board??

this is the magenta channel

(https://photos.smugmug.com/photos/i-mZDsjZB/0/7df699d2/XL/i-mZDsjZB-XL.jpg)
Title: Re: Young boy on the path
Post by: Hannie on April 07, 2018, 01:11:55 PM
Good catch BA!  It really does look like it could be a skateboard.

I have been wanting to try my bookmarked short and sweet tutorial on how to make shadows (not little dogs) for a while and could not resist trying it out on your project Lynn.  It was fun to do, not sure if the angle is right or the length bu all that is easily adjusted in the process.

tutorial:  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q_GOfAc3qTE

(https://s14.postimg.cc/kop27oynh/skate.jpg) (https://postimg.cc/image/kop27oynh/)
Title: Re: Young boy on the path
Post by: Lynnya on April 07, 2018, 03:58:31 PM
Wow Hannie that looks great!! not sure if the angle is right but it looks real.. board looks great too!  will check out the vid and re work some stuff.. Thanks!!
Title: Re: Young boy on the path
Post by: Shadow on April 07, 2018, 04:32:10 PM
Cool tip Hannie! Thanks for the example and link.  :)
Title: Re: Young boy on the path
Post by: Mhayes on April 07, 2018, 06:55:58 PM
Great catch and tips!
Title: Re: Young boy on the path
Post by: Lynnya on April 08, 2018, 01:34:02 PM
I'm still at it... need your eyes please.. what needs doing here...Thanks in advance  :hug:

(https://photos.smugmug.com/photos/i-9XwRBMT/1/4a6ac02e/XL/i-9XwRBMT-XL.jpg)
Title: Re: Young boy on the path
Post by: Mshake on April 08, 2018, 02:14:28 PM
From where you started to where it is now, fantastic job Lynn! The only suggestion I have now is to add a little blur to his shadow and after that, I would say he is ready to go home.   :up:
Title: Re: Young boy on the path
Post by: Lynnya on April 08, 2018, 02:22:56 PM
Thanks Mike.. will do that.. thanks for all your help..
Title: Re: Young boy on the path
Post by: Shadow on April 08, 2018, 02:36:37 PM
Looking SOOO good! Wee little thing ... copy the bottom wheel on the right (looking at screen) to the top axle same side. Wonderful restore Lynn!  :up:
Title: Re: Young boy on the path
Post by: Lynnya on April 08, 2018, 03:03:59 PM
Thanks dearie for all your help... that wheel doesn't show up cos of the white concrete.. will do as you say.. :hug: Great having such good eyes in the forum.. makes for such a better end product.. :up:
Title: Re: Young boy on the path
Post by: coopmj on April 09, 2018, 03:58:55 PM
Wow!!  Amazing job on this!
Title: Re: Young boy on the path
Post by: Lynnya on April 09, 2018, 04:06:08 PM
Thanks coop... had a lotta help  :)