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Title: grandmother and grandchildren
Post by: Alan_P on December 07, 2010, 12:08:00 PM

Hi Everyone,

What did I miss?

(http://i1091.photobucket.com/albums/i386/Alan_P/TurnerA_B2_09_08_3pt5x51.jpg)

(http://i1091.photobucket.com/albums/i386/Alan_P/firsttry.jpg)

Alan

Title: Re: grandmother and grandchildren
Post by: Tori803 on December 07, 2010, 12:13:51 PM

Hi Alan. It's looking pretty good. The first thing that catches my eye is the white streaks on the picture window. I think those are drapes showing through the window, so the streaks are likely damage.

Tori

Title: Re: grandmother and grandchildren
Post by: Mhayes on December 07, 2010, 01:56:28 PM

Hi Alan, great job on the roof! I agree with Tori on the picture window and the drapes being damage. Other than that, very nice.

Margie

Title: Re: grandmother and grandchildren
Post by: lurch on December 07, 2010, 03:00:30 PM

Hi Alan,

The 'new' roof is very well done - but I'd reduce the contrast on it quite a bit, since it draws my eye right to it. It's also slightly different in color from the 'old' roof (which is also well done).

Title: Re: grandmother and grandchildren
Post by: Alan_P on December 07, 2010, 03:40:17 PM

Hi Everyone,

I thought the white streaks were reflections. I took them out and toned down the roof.

(http://i1091.photobucket.com/albums/i386/Alan_P/secondtry.jpg)

Thanks for the input,

Alan

Title: Re: grandmother and grandchildren
Post by: lurch on December 07, 2010, 09:29:22 PM

Much better! The new roof still grabbed my eye, but now I've figured out why - on the gable, the shingle lines don't follow the roof line. Some folks are just a little slow . . .

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