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Author Topic: Johnny Rockets  (Read 399 times)

Offline Lynnya

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Johnny Rockets
« on: July 15, 2019, 02:08:43 PM »
Hi gang.. would appreciate eyes on this one please...





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Re: Johnny Rockets
« Reply #1 on: July 15, 2019, 03:34:32 PM »
Hey girl. Looking good. There's a bit of damage left at the top above the window on the left. Might be a bit too much blue if her hair is black.See what you think.



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Re: Johnny Rockets
« Reply #2 on: July 15, 2019, 03:45:12 PM »
Thanks Lyn.. one of those last minute tweaks .. the skin was too yellow so I tweaked the blue.. now too much blue lol.. good eyes on the damage thanks...
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Re: Johnny Rockets
« Reply #3 on: July 15, 2019, 03:48:11 PM »
Couple of small things - on her dress, I think the arm shapes aren't quite right - she looks chestless :)

On the sweatshirt, it should say 'SAN FRANCISCO'

I think the center woman's highlights are a tad bright

There's some discoloration in the lower part of the purple dress - I put a solid color adjustment layer set to color blend mode over it (masked to just the bottom parts)

Otherwise looks great - see what you think



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Re: Johnny Rockets
« Reply #4 on: July 16, 2019, 09:59:10 AM »
Thanks Jo Ann.. will fix today  :up:
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Re: Johnny Rockets
« Reply #5 on: July 16, 2019, 01:48:09 PM »
Lynn, nice work and good tips. I think the woman's dress has shoulder pads which would make the sleeves flare out a little. Considering this is an older woman and perhaps petite--yes, to shade variations (shadows in the folds) so as not to appear flat, but not because of "she looks chestless."
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Re: Johnny Rockets
« Reply #6 on: July 17, 2019, 10:09:23 AM »
Thanks Margie.. I did alter it and sent her home and was accepted.
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