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Author Topic: Cutting the cake  (Read 320 times)

Offline Marydh

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Cutting the cake
« on: May 18, 2019, 04:38:23 PM »
Hi all.  Please take a look and see what you think.  I keep wondering about the hump on her back.  She's too beautiful to be slouching like that. 
Thanks a lot.
Mary




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Re: Cutting the cake
« Reply #1 on: May 18, 2019, 05:50:30 PM »
Mary, looks great. Really nice job on the bride's face. My first thought was what hump? Then I saw what you meant. Since she is leaning forward, perhaps if you rounded her shoulder a little more and have some of the train fill that space?
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Re: Cutting the cake
« Reply #2 on: May 18, 2019, 06:23:59 PM »
Mary, Lynn's pic shows the back of her dress. Maybe it's just the way the fabric appears in this shot. Bet Margie's tip will help. Good luck.


« Last Edit: May 18, 2019, 06:27:23 PM by Shadow »

Offline Jo Ann Snover

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Re: Cutting the cake
« Reply #3 on: May 18, 2019, 09:27:03 PM »
I look a look at the blue channel and the other photo of the bride's gown at the back, and take a look at what I think might work for her back area



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Re: Cutting the cake
« Reply #4 on: May 19, 2019, 01:17:21 AM »
Jo Ann, that looks really good.
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Offline Marydh

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Re: Cutting the cake
« Reply #5 on: May 19, 2019, 11:17:47 AM »
Thanks everyone.  Iíll fiddle  with the transition. 
Anything else?

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Re: Cutting the cake
« Reply #6 on: May 19, 2019, 02:19:08 PM »
Looks great Mary  :up: :up:
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Offline Marydh

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Re: Cutting the cake
« Reply #7 on: May 19, 2019, 03:22:03 PM »
Yay!  Thank you.