What's it need?

[Ausimax]

Max

[glennab]

Hi Max!  It's WAY past my bed time and a school night (back to restoring half the night after a bit of a break), but I noticed your post and thought I'd throw in a few observations.  I think Dad's hair looks really good.  If you could get some of that shaping in the little guy's hair, it would be a huge improvement.  Both faces could use a little contrast.  And the boy's mouth appears to be pulled too much to the left as we look at him.

I think I'd add some shading (or mottling) to dad's shirt and the background, as both look a bit too stark.

You certainly know how to pick 'em, my friend.  Definitely a fine clean-up of one heck of a mess.  Just needs some tweaks.

G'night. Hugs!

GK

[Ausimax]

Thanks Glenna, sorry to have been so tardy in replying - but life does intrude!

Will make some adjustments and hopefully get it uploaded in the next few days.

Max