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Title: Cutting the cake
Post by: Marydh on May 18, 2019, 05:38:23 PM
Hi all.  Please take a look and see what you think.  I keep wondering about the hump on her back.  She's too beautiful to be slouching like that. 
Thanks a lot.
Mary
(https://i.postimg.cc/tY8SQyBK/for-forum-Ce.jpg) (https://postimg.cc/tY8SQyBK)

(https://i.postimg.cc/757Bqccf/to-forum-final.jpg) (https://postimg.cc/757Bqccf)
Title: Re: Cutting the cake
Post by: Mhayes on May 18, 2019, 06:50:30 PM
Mary, looks great. Really nice job on the bride's face. My first thought was what hump? Then I saw what you meant. Since she is leaning forward, perhaps if you rounded her shoulder a little more and have some of the train fill that space?
Title: Re: Cutting the cake
Post by: Shadow on May 18, 2019, 07:23:59 PM
Mary, Lynn's pic shows the back of her dress. Maybe it's just the way the fabric appears in this shot. Bet Margie's tip will help. Good luck.

(https://i.postimg.cc/nhDS4Lt2/2019-05-18-Cutting-the-cake.jpg) (https://postimages.org/)
Title: Re: Cutting the cake
Post by: Jo Ann Snover on May 18, 2019, 10:27:03 PM
I look a look at the blue channel and the other photo of the bride's gown at the back, and take a look at what I think might work for her back area


(https://i.postimg.cc/vgX1FBst/Cutting-the-cake-WIP-edited.jpg) (https://postimg.cc/vgX1FBst)
Title: Re: Cutting the cake
Post by: Mhayes on May 19, 2019, 02:17:21 AM
Jo Ann, that looks really good.
Title: Re: Cutting the cake
Post by: Marydh on May 19, 2019, 12:17:47 PM
Thanks everyone.  I'll fiddle  with the transition. 
Anything else?
Title: Re: Cutting the cake
Post by: Lynnya on May 19, 2019, 03:19:08 PM
Looks great Mary  :up: :up:
Title: Re: Cutting the cake
Post by: Marydh on May 19, 2019, 04:22:03 PM
Yay!  Thank you.