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Title: Three on a bench
Post by: Shadow on April 24, 2019, 05:49:55 PM
Hi Gang. Not quite sure about this one. This is a WIP. Am I headed in the right direction with the hair for the girl and the middle boy? Sure would appreciate your feedback and suggestions. Thanks!

(https://i.postimg.cc/JG8jRKkY/2019-04-24-Three-on-a-bench-1.jpg) (https://postimg.cc/JG8jRKkY)

(https://i.postimg.cc/SJGCR8LS/2019-04-24-Three-on-a-bench-2.jpg) (https://postimg.cc/SJGCR8LS)
Title: Re: Three on a bench
Post by: Jo Ann Snover on April 24, 2019, 09:08:00 PM
I wonder what was making you doubt your approach? Although the transition between hair and the dark background will require some care, I think you have the color in the restore matching the undamaged areas and the overall direction of the hair & parting match.

I am guessing that there were some trees in the background - very dark and blurry - so making the dark background mottled in some way will probably avoid it ending up looking like a roll of black paper in a studio shot!

Was there something specific you weren't comfortable with?
Title: Re: Three on a bench
Post by: Candice on April 25, 2019, 11:28:50 AM
One tree is showing up in the left but only the trunk. Then there is a bird house behind the middle boy, but you really can't tell make out strong details.  I can see the peak, door opening, and a little bird, the left of the middle boy. I took it into Lab, and that helped the colors did come up a little more. 
(https://i.postimg.cc/PC3hyc83/2019-04-24-Three-on-a-bench6.jpg) (https://postimg.cc/PC3hyc83)

This is Candy play below.  Whatever you choose to do Shadow, the family will be thrilled to get their babies back!!  :hug:

(https://i.postimg.cc/NLJDxvs2/2019-04-24-Three-on-a-bench67.jpg) (https://postimg.cc/NLJDxvs2)
Title: Re: Three on a bench
Post by: Lynnya on April 25, 2019, 12:57:31 PM
Lookin good Lyn.. maybe levels sliders could come in a tad? :up: :up:
Title: Re: Three on a bench
Post by: Shadow on April 26, 2019, 10:35:46 AM
Thanks Jo Ann. think I had diddled around with it so much that I was just not sure if I was heading in the right direction. Always appreciate the extra eyes!
Candy,  :funny:  Reading on the wee little screen you had me going. Love it.
Thanks Lynn. Will check it when we get back home. Away celebrating a few family birthdays.
Have a good weekend everyone.  :)
Title: Re: Three on a bench
Post by: Candice on April 26, 2019, 11:25:17 AM
Ha!  I feed birds. I see them where a lot don't!  ;)
Title: Re: Three on a bench
Post by: Shadow on April 30, 2019, 08:20:43 AM
Current WIP. How's it look?

(https://i.postimg.cc/jCvHMCyF/2019-04-24-Three-on-a-bench-3.jpg) (https://postimg.cc/jCvHMCyF)
Title: Re: Three on a bench
Post by: Lynnya on April 30, 2019, 08:48:47 AM
Looks lovely.. tiny thing jumped out at me.. the little girls hair all around the edges.. I would do a color layer and just brush that in to the edge a bit.. looks a bit grey and colorless.. also maybe the little blonde boys hair could just fill in some of the less colored areas.. Family are gonna love this.
Title: Re: Three on a bench
Post by: Shadow on April 30, 2019, 09:00:51 AM
Thanks Lynn ... better?

(https://i.postimg.cc/3dgSB2KQ/2019-04-24-Three-on-a-bench-4.jpg) (https://postimg.cc/3dgSB2KQ)
Title: Re: Three on a bench
Post by: Lynnya on April 30, 2019, 11:11:34 AM
Lovely! :loveit:
Title: Re: Three on a bench
Post by: Jo Ann Snover on April 30, 2019, 12:36:36 PM
Only a small quibble - I think the transition between the hair and the background needs to be more like the original - I know you made a change to the color, but it's now all in focus and sharp instead of a gradual soft blurry transition (for all three heads).

I'd love to know what the littlest kid was so surprised by :)
Title: Re: Three on a bench
Post by: Shadow on April 30, 2019, 06:06:40 PM
Thanks Lynn and Jo Ann. Softened the edges and fixed the accidentally "dented" wee one's forehead  :P 
Here's the final.

(https://i.postimg.cc/FkyGYyTZ/2019-04-24-Three-on-a-bench-5.jpg) (https://postimg.cc/FkyGYyTZ)
Title: Re: Three on a bench
Post by: Jo Ann Snover on April 30, 2019, 06:09:16 PM
Something crept in on the left edge of the photo between the last version and the final - there's a couple of color splotches than weren't there before. Can you zap them?

Otherwise it looks great
Title: Re: Three on a bench
Post by: Shadow on April 30, 2019, 06:12:56 PM
 :up:
Title: Re: Three on a bench
Post by: Candice on April 30, 2019, 11:37:16 PM
Looks great, even without the bird houses.  lol 

Title: Re: Three on a bench
Post by: Mhayes on May 01, 2019, 12:30:30 AM
Shadow, what a lovely restore. Makes me smile at their sweetness.
Title: Re: Three on a bench
Post by: Shadow on May 01, 2019, 05:26:27 PM
Thanks Margie and Candy.  :hug: