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Title: Bride and Maid
Post by: Lynnya on March 05, 2019, 03:57:44 PM
Hi gang.. please check this out for color only.. thanks a bunch..methinks there is still too much orange going on here maybe

(https://photos.smugmug.com/photos/i-4N9dkst/0/bf5d44fa/XL/i-4N9dkst-XL.jpg)  (https://photos.smugmug.com/photos/i-7QtSQm4/0/43ecc5c4/XL/i-7QtSQm4-XL.jpg)


I reduced the red and yellow saturation.. is it better? I'll have to put the vibrance back into the flowers tho I see..

(https://photos.smugmug.com/photos/i-VdvqFzS/0/3c327961/XL/i-VdvqFzS-XL.jpg)   (https://photos.smugmug.com/photos/i-4wtrvm2/0/ba2428bd/XL/i-4wtrvm2-XL.jpg)
Title: Re: Bride and Maid
Post by: Hannie on March 06, 2019, 07:51:32 AM
Looking good already Lynn!
I would move the Magenta slider a little towards the Green and perhaps even the Yellow very little towards Blue.
The levels can come in some to give slightly more shadow and black?

(https://i.postimg.cc/d7qDfD12/lynn.jpg) (https://postimg.cc/d7qDfD12)
Title: Re: Bride and Maid
Post by: Lynnya on March 06, 2019, 08:42:05 AM
Thanks Hannie... will do that.. :up:
Title: Re: Bride and Maid
Post by: Shadow on March 06, 2019, 02:45:40 PM
Yep, Hannie's recommendations are spot on. Looking good on this wee little screen. Good luck.
Title: Re: Bride and Maid
Post by: Lynnya on March 06, 2019, 05:14:31 PM
Thanks Lyn.. am I close? Final?

(https://photos.smugmug.com/photos/i-V3FfXqP/0/8dbd0166/XL/i-V3FfXqP-XL.jpg)
Title: Re: Bride and Maid
Post by: Jo Ann Snover on March 06, 2019, 07:53:48 PM
I'm not Lynn, but... :)

I like the color on this and other than a couple of tiny cloning mishaps on the right side, I think it looks good.

On the vertical molding on the far right, there are two places where you've interrupted the decorative routing where you cloned. On the draped fabric on the far right, the lowest drape has some wonky folds in it that weren't in the original - I think you can borrow from the wider  "scoop" above. If possible, there should be one more small fold in that wide scoop above, but I doubt anyone will miss it :)

Title: Re: Bride and Maid
Post by: Lynnya on March 06, 2019, 09:03:02 PM
Oh so good to have you back  :loveit:
Title: Re: Bride and Maid
Post by: Lynnya on March 07, 2019, 01:12:27 PM
How is this.. anything else?

(https://photos.smugmug.com/photos/i-t4NtH5p/0/b996af63/XL/i-t4NtH5p-XL.jpg)
Title: Re: Bride and Maid
Post by: Jo Ann Snover on March 07, 2019, 01:16:08 PM
One tiny white gap at the edge of the drapes on the right and I think you're done!
Title: Re: Bride and Maid
Post by: Lynnya on March 07, 2019, 01:19:58 PM
Ahh.. right I see it.. thanks so much Jo Ann - I'll fix and send them home.
Title: Re: Bride and Maid
Post by: Shadow on March 10, 2019, 09:29:46 PM
Lovely as usual Lynn!  :up:
Title: Re: Bride and Maid
Post by: Candice on March 11, 2019, 01:51:10 AM
So very pretty, Lynn!
Title: Re: Bride and Maid
Post by: Lynnya on March 11, 2019, 10:00:18 AM
Thank you kindly ladies  :loveit: