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Title: Four Ladies
Post by: Marydh on July 31, 2018, 07:33:55 PM
Well this was a doozy but fun.
Skin color ok?  Dress colors?
What  about the girl's hat (the one on our left).  Well, for that matter, all
the hats.
If you see anything let me know.
Thanks,
Mary

(https://s8.postimg.cc/ueif49zht/for_forum.jpg) (https://postimg.cc/image/ueif49zht/)(https://s8.postimg.cc/psmavx68x/final.jpg) (https://postimg.cc/image/psmavx68x/)
Title: Re: Four Ladies
Post by: Bambi on July 31, 2018, 07:52:25 PM
Very nice work. It looks just a tiny bit too pink overall to me. You can see it in the greens and browns in the background. I think the hats look fine. They seem to match the dresses, which was fashion at the time.
Title: Re: Four Ladies
Post by: Hannie on August 01, 2018, 08:19:07 AM
Great job  Mary. :up:
One more little pick: perhaps you can match the depth of the shading on the skirts and on the middle lady's neck?
Title: Re: Four Ladies
Post by: Shadow on August 01, 2018, 11:11:26 AM
Wonderful Mary! Bambi and Hannie's tip will put the icing on the top!
Title: Re: Four Ladies
Post by: Marydh on August 01, 2018, 07:53:39 PM
Hi all.  Thanks for the tips.  See what you think now.  Please still tell me if you see anything.

(https://s8.postimg.cc/vv41ghufl/for_forum.jpg) (https://postimg.cc/image/vv41ghufl/)
(https://s8.postimg.cc/so9hwv29t/final.jpg) (https://postimg.cc/image/so9hwv29t/)
(https://s8.postimg.cc/5a1ikxzs1/for_forum_again.jpg) (https://postimg.cc/image/5a1ikxzs1/)
Title: Re: Four Ladies
Post by: Hannie on August 02, 2018, 02:43:08 AM
Mary, I can't show you what I mean at the moment but I wonder if you can have the original and your WIP next to each other and look back and forth at the lady in the middle you may see the difference in shading that I was talking about earlier?
Title: Re: Four Ladies
Post by: Marydh on August 02, 2018, 12:01:04 PM
Hannie,
I think I now know what you are saying.  I just need to darken the shading that  I had before on the lady in the middle, right?  I'll try again later.
Is color ok now?
Mary
Title: Re: Four Ladies
Post by: Marydh on August 02, 2018, 07:28:41 PM
How about this one?

(https://s8.postimg.cc/pgorovthd/Hope_this_does_it_8_2.jpg) (https://postimg.cc/image/pgorovthd/)
Title: Re: Four Ladies
Post by: Marydh on August 02, 2018, 07:30:49 PM
Looking at it again, are the feet on the two on our left too pink?
I'm losing track of things.
Thanks,
Mary
Title: Re: Four Ladies
Post by: Shadow on August 02, 2018, 08:05:18 PM
Looking so good Mary! On my screen, they do appear a bit too pink. Look forward to your final!
(https://s15.postimg.cc/4twnpubbb/2018_08_02_Pink.jpg) (https://postimg.cc/image/4twnpubbb/)
Title: Re: Four Ladies
Post by: Marydh on August 03, 2018, 01:06:54 PM
Another try.
(https://s8.postimg.cc/7o8pxg229/Hope_this_does_it_8_3.jpg) (https://postimg.cc/image/7o8pxg229/)
Title: Re: Four Ladies
Post by: Hannie on August 03, 2018, 02:56:05 PM
Love the shadows Mary!   :up2:
Title: Re: Four Ladies
Post by: Marydh on August 03, 2018, 03:41:09 PM
Yay!!!!  I'm sending it in.
Thanks everybody.
Mary
Title: Re: Four Ladies
Post by: Shadow on August 03, 2018, 03:49:46 PM
 :up:  And Mary, your pic title (Hope_this_does_it_8_3.jpg) is a hoot!!  :)
Title: Re: Four Ladies
Post by: Mhayes on August 03, 2018, 11:59:54 PM
Looks great Mary!
Title: Re: Four Ladies
Post by: Hannie on August 04, 2018, 02:35:24 AM
Quote from: Shadow on August 03, 2018, 03:49:46 PM
:up:  And Mary, your pic title (Hope_this_does_it_8_3.jpg) is a hoot!!  :)

;D
Title: Re: Four Ladies
Post by: Marydh on August 05, 2018, 05:10:28 PM
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