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« on: September 28, 2011, 05:08:00 PM »

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First post for this work in progress. Let me know how it can be improved.

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« Reply #1 on: September 28, 2011, 06:36:04 PM »

Bambi,

Fantastic job on damage removal.  Overall looks a little yellow and the forehead and chin on the girl look a little blown out.  Maybe it's just my monitor, but I pulled it into Photoshop CS5 and that is the impression I get. 

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« Reply #2 on: September 28, 2011, 07:08:20 PM »

I had to laugh when I saw my own post. I used Shujen's tip about using the Brightness/Contrast layer to see the tiny spots better. It really helped, but I got so used to looking at it too bright. . . . So I agree, Mike. Skin tones and brightness need to be revisited.
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« Reply #3 on: September 28, 2011, 07:21:35 PM »

Bambi,

Nice repair, but yes, it is too orange. The other thing is that I think the background should stay closer to the original after color correcting. That too may be a case of having it too bright.  Wow!

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« Reply #4 on: October 01, 2011, 03:11:41 PM »

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This is closer to the original brightness and the skin tones are better. How does it look to you?

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« Reply #5 on: October 01, 2011, 03:41:05 PM »

Great job Bambi!
I think the boy's left lower trouser-leg extends behind the girl's forearm?

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« Reply #6 on: October 01, 2011, 03:58:01 PM »



Yes. It looks better to make that leg fuller.
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« Reply #7 on: October 02, 2011, 05:13:34 AM »

Looks good Bambi,

Great Job!

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« Reply #8 on: October 02, 2011, 11:03:22 AM »

Bambi, much better! I wonder if you might consider on the girl to add more shading to her skin. I know this is a studio shot and lights were used to prevent shadows, but some light shading would give a more natural look. What I did was sample with the eye dropper the color of her skin and then pick a color just a shade darker. I added a blank layer and then painted in at 25% opacity with a soft brush. If it appeared to dark in places, I lowered the opacity. Areas that I worked on were her neck and under her chin. Her hands look good, but I started to shade in the crook of her arm and the inside of her arms closes to the dress. On her dress I darken around the waist and in some of the folds on the top. This will be very subtle, but I think you will see an improvement.

Great job on the background.

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« Reply #9 on: October 02, 2011, 11:50:10 AM »

Bambi, it helps if you place the original next to your WIP and look back and forth frequently while applying shade.

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« Reply #10 on: October 02, 2011, 01:57:51 PM »

Margie, you're right. I added highlights, but didn't shade around them. Her arms and chin do look a little too flat. Hannie, that's how I did the anchor shadows (with the pictures next to each other). It's the best way to do highlights and shading.

Want you all to know that I do a much better job with your help. Hope other members will learn along with me. Thank you all.

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« Reply #11 on: October 02, 2011, 07:35:04 PM »

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I made the skin tones more brown—less orange—and added shading and highlights on the girl. A Curves Adjustment Layer made the color shift back to orange. So I used a Soft Light Layer to burn and dodge. Also took Hannie's advice and put the original right next to the file as I did the color adjustment and burn-dodge.

On the website, the space between the two looks too white. I'll check that.
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« Reply #12 on: October 02, 2011, 08:18:20 PM »

Bambi, you did a great job restoring the photo.  The only thing I may want to change is her dress below the waist.  It looks a little thin and flat.  I can't see anything in the original.  Maybe there wasn't much contrast in the original.
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« Reply #13 on: October 02, 2011, 10:28:49 PM »

There was nothing usable in the original, but it does look more than a little flat. I added the luminosity of a little girl's chiffon dress, based on the little info I could find in all the channels. It needs a burn and dodge for shape, like I did for the skin tones. Thank you, Shujen.

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« Reply #14 on: October 03, 2011, 03:43:42 AM »

.... A Curves Adjustment Layer made the color shift back to orange. So I used a Soft Light Layer to burn and dodge.....

Bambi if you use luminosity mode on the Curves layer the colors will stay the same.

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