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Picnic

Party of 10

Smoke, aka the Wack Job

[Alan_P]

Hi Everyone,

What did I miss?







Alan

[Tori803]

Hi Alan. It's looking pretty good. The first thing that catches my eye is the white streaks on the picture window. I think those are drapes showing through the window, so the streaks are likely damage.

Tori

[Mhayes]

Hi Alan, great job on the roof! I agree with Tori on the picture window and the drapes being damage. Other than that, very nice.

Margie

[lurch]

Hi Alan,

The 'new' roof is very well done - but I'd reduce the contrast on it quite a bit, since it draws my eye right to it. It's also slightly different in color from the 'old' roof (which is also well done).

[Alan_P]

Hi Everyone,

I thought the white streaks were reflections. I took them out and toned down the roof.




Thanks for the input,

Alan

[lurch]

Much better! The new roof still grabbed my eye, but now I've figured out why - on the gable, the shingle lines don't follow the roof line. Some folks are just a little slow . . .