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« on: August 11, 2008, 07:30:40 AM »
Guys,

Been looking at this one on and off for a few days... Can I please have you thoughts/comments so far? Anything else need doing? Any obvious problems?

Dave.
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« Reply #1 on: August 11, 2008, 07:33:26 AM »
Just noticed the shadown on the backdrop - will fix that Smiley
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« Reply #2 on: August 11, 2008, 08:13:12 AM »
Hi Dave,

Another good job!
You could lighten the hands and the pants a little.  A little softening of the hard outlines and a tiny bit less saturation?

Hannie
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« Reply #3 on: August 11, 2008, 08:31:50 AM »
Better colour/brightness/lines?? Thanks Hannie Smiley

Man I need a beer! Smiley
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« Reply #4 on: August 11, 2008, 08:49:44 AM »
Dave, I like your version where it is a little darker better but I do like that you made it less saturated.

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« Reply #5 on: August 11, 2008, 11:00:51 AM »
How about we meet in the middle?  Too Funny
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« Reply #6 on: August 11, 2008, 01:54:14 PM »
The middle looks just right to me!

(I looked at it earlier on a another computer and all the the images looked very light, sure hope I gave you the right advice!  Embarrassed then again, you would have said something if it didn't look right on your PC, wouldn't you?)

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« Reply #7 on: August 11, 2008, 05:41:16 PM »
Beautiful job Dave. Thumbs up The colours look fine here.
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